I will also say that the voice in this is so captivating. i want to hang out with this guy and get him to narrate the obituaries. All the language just feels exactly right. Loved all the parentheticals and quips too. Always enjoy reading your work so much.
The whole story I was thinking that maybe Ms. T is an ex-student of Ishmael and she never understood his teachings and this was her punishment. Great story. New sub
I’d buy anything you sold with writing like that! Bless that precious brain of yours! 10 stars and one extra star because you know I love fucking profanity
I will also say that the voice in this is so captivating. i want to hang out with this guy and get him to narrate the obituaries. All the language just feels exactly right. Loved all the parentheticals and quips too. Always enjoy reading your work so much.
Thanks Jon! It took me a while to feel like the voice was right, it was a tricky one to nail down, glad you enjoyed it my friend
Those damn rat bastards. Loved the voice of this one.
Thanks Daisy!
BEST ENDING EVER. Every individual sentence I read in your stories makes me robotically clap my hands like a monkey-with-cymbals toy.
Thanks!! lol love you’re staying on brand with the monkey imagery.
The dialogue and the narrators voice here is some of my favorite I have read in quite a while, Will.
Enjoyed the shit outta this one.
Thanks so much Sudana! It was a fun voice to figure out
So good! Love the narrator. average caregiver experience lol
Haha, thanks! I work with a lot of caregivers so I've heard some stories that helped inform this one haha
The whole story I was thinking that maybe Ms. T is an ex-student of Ishmael and she never understood his teachings and this was her punishment. Great story. New sub
Thanks Murphy! Oh right, I forgot about Ishmael. That would have been a nice twist!
I’d buy anything you sold with writing like that! Bless that precious brain of yours! 10 stars and one extra star because you know I love fucking profanity
haha thanks! There’s a healthy helping of bad words in this one. I’ll have to wash my mouth out with soap
Chilling.
Thanks Jane!
i loved this one. all cheered up, a little creeped out - good times all around
thanks so much !!
So very good. And that ending, brilliant
Thanks so much Keith!!!
Excellent narrative voice Will, a vivid story of an everyday kind of horror. Really locked me in to the story, that first-person character
Thanks, Murph!
Well you definitely got me with that opening line! :)
Haha! I think it’s my favorite opening line I ever wrote
This was wild, Will. Wild.
Cool short story!
Thanks Andrew!