school day

[A.P. Murphy]

Mystic gnarliness, trying to unravel it but not really bothering that much as I like the cryptic bits just as much as the apparent bits.

[Jon T]

gorgeous, i can feel this like I'm picking gravel out of my knees

[Will Boucher]

Thanks Jon! Make sure you get all that gravel out, don’t want that knee getting infected

[Jennifer James]

I read this over so many times, and each time there was something new.

Absolutely beautiful.

[Will Boucher]

Thanks so much, Jennifer! Glad some new things come up with each reread

[E.L. Zeitgeist]

I read this through a few times, peeling the layers to understand it, until I got to a point where I just wanted to appreciate the pungent stench of whatever magnificent, quiet tragedy perpetually exists here.

[Will Boucher]

Thanks for taking the time to peel this onion, Katie!

[Michael Edward]

Your descriptions are divine! So vivid. So evocative. So good!

[Will Boucher]

Thanks Michael!

[Sean Thomas McDonnell]

Brilliant. Like--brilliant!

[Will Boucher]

Thanks Sean!!

[J. Curtis]

Will - beautifully written. I’m not sure I understand it all (maybe I’m not supposed to) but I like it

[Will Boucher]

Thanks, J!

[lindsey peters berg]

killer first sentence

[Will Boucher]

thanks lindsey!

[Sandy Stuart Shaller]

Will, "School Day" is blisteringly beautiful. The opening lyrical poem sets the perfect stage for what follows. I got very sad at the end. 😊

[Will Boucher]

Thanks for checking it out, Sandy! Always appreciate you reading :)

[molly]

this is so awesome Will

[Will Boucher]

thanks so much, Molly! I’m glad you liked it :)