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Dude, you have a gift… There is a stream of consciousness vibe here but very cohesive and compelling. You need to be writing fiction… or something. I used to be a pro musician also and you have that rare lyrical quality to your writing… This particular format is interesting but you’re not living up to what you’re capable of. You need to push yourself harder…

Good luck!!!

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Jan 17·edited Jan 17Author

Thanks for the kind words, Tomas! I'm working on some fiction that I will be sharing soon! It's a different beast so I'm taking some time to stew on what I'm writing. Also, what was your weapon of choice as a pro musician?

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I say "bye-bye" all the time and have forever. I'm not sure it sounds good, though. I feel a bit femme right after I say it, but I can't stop myself. Oh well.

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