There was a flash fiction competition where all the entries had to be based on an image. One of the images was of an older woman sitting at a table watching another woman open a dishwasher. It kinda just unfolded from there haha
Love that you added Dolly into the mix because I kept thinking of the young girl as some twisted shape-shifting cat creature. Every piece you write forces me to stretch my imagination muscles!
Really, deeply love your style and flow in this story. Beautiful work Will.
Right back at you, love your style as well my friend.
I really want to know how you came up with this one. Reminds me a little of the Elves and the Shoemaker story.
There was a flash fiction competition where all the entries had to be based on an image. One of the images was of an older woman sitting at a table watching another woman open a dishwasher. It kinda just unfolded from there haha
Oh wow! That's funny.
Love that you added Dolly into the mix because I kept thinking of the young girl as some twisted shape-shifting cat creature. Every piece you write forces me to stretch my imagination muscles!
Haha I love the idea of a shape shifting cat creature
The imagery in this one is wonderful
Thanks, clara!!
Just a pure joy to read. 10/10. That sweating baloney sandwich will haunt me...
haha! Thanks, Bryan! Indeed...a sweaty baloney sandwich is the stuff of nightmares
Great as always. Every sentence is packed so full of juice, love the way you write.
lol glad to hear they are juicy. Thanks for the kind words my friend
your anatomical descriptions are out of this world
Thanks so much, Molly! 🙏
“She had her mouth puckered up like a belly button...” — I really liked that description. In fact, I really liked the whole piece :)
haha! glad that little bit stood out. Thanks for the kind word, Michael!
Wooooooooo baby. This is nice.
Thanks, Daisy!!!!
Seriously very very good. Perhaps very very very good.
damnnnn I hit the 3x very level??? I can retire now
Astonishing story! I'll think about this one for a long time. Loved it.
Thanks so much, Liz! I’m glad it will stick with you :)
Snappy prose, Will. Every paragraph.
Thanks, Brad! Always appreciate hearing from ya
Fantastic as always.
Thanks, Sean!
What an interesting piece!
Thank you!