Phenomenal work - I feel I’ve learned a lot as a writer just by reading your work. Your tendency to simply describe through picture (seatbelt his arm around her - vs wrap his arm like a seatbelt) rather than use the word ‘like’ has driven me to better descriptions - so thanks for sharing.
Phenomenal work - I feel I’ve learned a lot as a writer just by reading your work. Your tendency to simply describe through picture (seatbelt his arm around her - vs wrap his arm like a seatbelt) rather than use the word ‘like’ has driven me to better descriptions - so thanks for sharing.
wow! I’m honored by these kind words, Keith! Thank you for being such a regular reader my friend :)
I’m with Keith! Your chewy phrasing is so quintessentially “Willian”! This one in particular!
Intense ending. Very gripping, (no pun intended).
lol 😂 that pun is too good
the parable in here re: motherhood is astounding.
Thanks Clancy 🙏
Some dynamite turns of phrase as ever Will.
thanks Murph!