as you were (ii)

[Rebecca Goodall]

Gah those placenta cubes. Gag. Retch. OY! So visceral!

[Will Boucher]

they don’t taste so bad once you get used to them.

lol jk, I gagged writing it

[Clancy Steadwell]

Dude I am loving this, is this smell of his perhaps going to be key again with these bugs? can’t wait to see. the theme of pregnancy and birth overall is very interesting to me

[Will Boucher]

Thanks, Clancy! Idk, you’ll have to wait and sniff..I mean see

[Michael Edward]

The ending of this part is is great.

You captured that experience of saying ‘yes’ to something we don’t want too so well!

I’m very intrigued to see what’s coming next. :)

[Will Boucher]

I feel like saying yes to things I don’t want to is a huge part of my life lol

[Michael Edward]

Same, Will!

[A.P. Murphy]

The sharp sour tang of imminent catastrophe fills our lungs once more

[Will Boucher]

It’s coming…

[Jon T]

loving the pacing you've set serial-wize. looking forward to more. sharp writing as always - super plus plus

[Will Boucher]

Thanks, Jon!

[petrichor]

i enjoy this mix of interpersonal developments and the vague promise of something horror

[Will Boucher]

I’m glad you’re digging it :)

[C.S. Mee]

great writing, will. i’m enjoying this !

[Will Boucher]

thank, c.s., I’m so glad you’re liking it!