The world building is this is wonderfully visceral. Stunning first piece to this series Will. Excited to have you back and looking forward to the next instalment!
Oh I meant this in the best way. I love when writers / stories push me. I love it. I'll listen to those thoughts and get to work. It's not a contest for me; it's seeing what can be done that I'm not yet doing.
I know the feeling. Sometimes my brain makes it a contest but it’s just too fun to be a contest. I love being pushed as well and I feel the same feeling you describe hit me when I read your work too
Mmmmmmmmserially!!! This was a MOOD and I don’t know if you planned to release it this week of all weeks but it pairs well for those of us who just like to wallow in the uneasy end of the pool.
This promises much - I'm dead excited to see more, Will. Prose big n' bouncy, story intriguing, approach fresh and startling.
Thanks Murph!
Well sign me the fuck up for this ride!
Welcome aboard!!
i am so happy i couldn't read this right away because now i have a part 2 at the ready! where is it going what are we doing tell me everything
It’s a secret!!!!!
“She looked up as the blower rumbled to life, manhandling its tube into battle position, holding it with both hands like Montana’s little friend.”
The whole damn thing is great but this line especially made me chuckle.
Haha thanks Sudana! This one made me chuckle when it spilled out onto the page too
Will, you're brilliant at painting a picture. "Magic stench geysering out her widened mouth" is pretty fantastic. Always look forward to your work.
Thanks so much Roman :)
The world building is this is wonderfully visceral. Stunning first piece to this series Will. Excited to have you back and looking forward to the next instalment!
Thanks Ilan! Glad the world was built in your head. This is some new territory for me, that is wonderful to hear.
This is great Will. Every word was so juicy, sending me to the next one. I subscribed, can't wait to read part 2
thanks Nem!!! hopefully you find part 2 just as juicy
Love the detail of him being a gecko since geckos eat grasshoppers. Excited for the rest
Thanks, NJ! Always appreciate you
Really engaging, Will. Your style is unique in a way that’s hard to pinpoint, but whatever it is I like it.
Looking forward to more. :)
Thanks Michael :)
Some of the things going through my head when I read this: I'll never be this good - I gotta step it up - I want this to be a novel in my hands.
Sean, bud, you’re the best. Don’t listen to those thoughts, it ain’t a contest and your writing has touched so many
Oh I meant this in the best way. I love when writers / stories push me. I love it. I'll listen to those thoughts and get to work. It's not a contest for me; it's seeing what can be done that I'm not yet doing.
I know the feeling. Sometimes my brain makes it a contest but it’s just too fun to be a contest. I love being pushed as well and I feel the same feeling you describe hit me when I read your work too
Mmmmmmmmserially!!! This was a MOOD and I don’t know if you planned to release it this week of all weeks but it pairs well for those of us who just like to wallow in the uneasy end of the pool.
yes it was supposed to come out this week and it seems like it took on new meaning
This was riviting in every way. I'll be eager to read the next installment, Will.
thanks, Sandy!
Beautiful first installment, Will. Looking forward to more!
Thanks so much Brock!
you have yet to disappoint will. this made my day , and i’m saving part ii for a mid afternoon treat for myself tomorrow
thanks so much Mike! I’m glad you’re digging it. Part iii also comes out tomorrow so you’ll have a two-for-one special
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