I sometimes stock soda in the fridges of the office I work in and I make sure they are perfectly 'facing' every single time. Working retail really made that a permanent muscle in me. People in the office love it so much, it really does do somethin'
Tore through this one!! The pace IS perfect! When you revealed Dani had a pitbull, I was like Uhoh. Then at the end I was like, wait, is it what I think it is? Am I supposed to know? Or should I be questioning? Am I an idiot? Should I Google this? 😂
lmao yeah Dani’s pit is a red herring for sure. I wasn’t really sure about the pacing, took me a bit to make it feel “right” to me and I’m so glad to hear it translated. thanks :)
I sometimes stock soda in the fridges of the office I work in and I make sure they are perfectly 'facing' every single time. Working retail really made that a permanent muscle in me. People in the office love it so much, it really does do somethin'
right? I actually worked in a pet shop for a long ass time and it hits different when there are animals on the labels
Will, you are a mad genius. Vivid and expertly drawn. Only you can twist tedium and banality into utter chaos. Loved it!
thanks so much Ken, hope all is well my friend
Can’t complain. Head full of nightmares; fingers to hit keys. Life is a blast.
I really dig this! Glad I stumbled across your work and excited to dive into more
Glad you enjoyed it Katrina :)
Tore through this one!! The pace IS perfect! When you revealed Dani had a pitbull, I was like Uhoh. Then at the end I was like, wait, is it what I think it is? Am I supposed to know? Or should I be questioning? Am I an idiot? Should I Google this? 😂
lmao yeah Dani’s pit is a red herring for sure. I wasn’t really sure about the pacing, took me a bit to make it feel “right” to me and I’m so glad to hear it translated. thanks :)
Excellent.
thanks sean !!
So funny! A huge wacky circus full of creatures, characters and chaos, and the reader, me, right in the middle of it all!
Thanks Camila! I’m glad you enjoyed being in the middle of the madness!!
I worked in the kitchen, like Carmie, so I speak Pandemonium.
This was fantastic Will. It started in such an interesting way and then it just carried on getting better from there. :)
Thanks so much Michael !
My pleasure, Will :)
Sheesh. So many feelings in this. Loved how it kept surprising.
Thanks Deirdre :)
Pacing this one was hard, went back and forth forever
fantastic work on this one
thanks so much :)
I was caught from go, and what a ride! The dismount was brutally good!
Thanks Liz!!
Will, that took a great turn at the end. Sucked right in and then, boom!